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John Seavey's Storytelling Engines: Ghost Rider
Here's the latest Storytelling Engine from John Seavey. Check out more of them at his blog, Fraggmented.
Storytelling Engines: Ghost Rider
(or "Field Exercise")
Since the 'Ghost Rider' movie came out three days ago, it seems useful to examine the flame-headed vengeance demon's storytelling engine now. Not only is it topical, but it gives us a chance to look at the modifications to a storytelling engine "in action", as it were; in a regular comics series, writers generally have to work around things they've established in previous issues instead of throw them out, but in an adaptation, you can take the engine apart, put it back together, and see what parts wind up lying on the floor afterwards. (This, by the way, is being presented as my entry for Metaphor Of The Year at the 2007 Literary Devices Awards.)
With that in mind, let's start at the same place the screenwriters almost certainly did--the basic concept. As we can see, the movie uses the "Johnny Blaze sells his soul to the devil" concept, rather than the "Dan Ketch is the host of the spirit of his ancestor, Noble Kale, who is also the Angel of Death, and he and Johnny Blaze are long-lost brothers, and Johnny was supposed to be the Ghost Rider but his long-lost mother made a deal with the devil to keep him from being the host of Noble Kale, but instead he...sold his soul to the devil". Blaze's origin is simpler, clearer, and most importantly, it's more dramatic. This isn't to say they kept it wholesale; rather than have it involve two families of stunt-bikers, the Blazes and the Simpsons, and the incestuous interplay between the two, they streamlined it down to the most basic, clearest, most dramatic premise of all. Johnny Blaze sells his soul to the devil to save his father from cancer, but Dad dies anyway in a motorcycle crash and Johnny has to live with the consequences.
The movie takes that from Johnny Blaze's 'Ghost Rider' series, but leaves most of the rest behind. The obsession with stunt biking (a legacy of the Evel Knievel craze of the 1970s) is reduced to a mere trapping, the obsession with Satanism (a legacy of the 'Exorcist' craze of the 1970s) is toned down, the look of Ghost Rider and his bike are jettisoned (again, think Evel Knievel), the rogue's gallery is junked (the most notable villain Johnny Blaze had, apart from the Devil, was the Orb, an evil stunt biker with laser beams in his helmet) and most importantly, Blaze's modus operandi changes. In the comics, Roxy's pure love for him stopped Satan from collecting his soul, and he spent his days as a stunt biker and his nights trying to find a way out of the deal. This is a false status quo (more on these in a later column), because it carries with it the implied promise that he will resolve this storyline--but once he does, you have to find something else to do with the character. (Sure enough, once Blaze saved his soul, he wound up with two more status quos--one, where he was a Hollywood stuntman/superhero, and a second, where he wandered the Southwest and fought evil.) The movie just skips straight to the "wandering and fighting evil" phase, because it's (again) simpler, clearer, and more dramatic.
Most of the rest of the movie comes from the 1990s Ghost Rider. The look ("tough biker" rather than "stunt biker"), the powers (the "penance stare"), the gravedigger as confidant (although the substance was entirely different in the comics), and best of all, the enemies come from the later series. All these storytelling elements were viewed, by the screenwriters, as being the better of the two versions (and really, it's hard to argue. Blackheart, son of the Devil, or the Orb? Tough choice.)
Of course, there will be fans who see the new film and insist it's not "faithful" to the original, but sometimes, that's exactly what a good concept needs; Johnny Blaze's story is, at its heart, about a good man who makes a bad decision for the right reasons, and has to live with the consequences (which involve becoming a flaming-skull-headed demon biker). That works, and is always going to work; the "faith" comes in keeping that, not in sticking with every decision made afterwards, good or bad.
- Posted on February 21, 2007 @ 01:32 PM






8 Comments
DCD
February 21, 2007 at 1:58 pm
False Status Quo = Shang Chi Syndrome
Ian Astheimer
February 21, 2007 at 4:50 pm
Blackheart, son of the Devil, or the Orb? Tough choice.
The Orb. Every time.
(By the way, how do you quote text in word balloons, as seen elsewhere on the site? Is it blahblah?)
Ian Astheimer
February 21, 2007 at 4:51 pm
Ha ha. Damn. Okay.
Try that again.
Is it (quote)blahblah(/quote) with the parentheses replaced by greater than/less than signs?
Bill Reed
February 21, 2007 at 5:13 pm
It's (blockquote).
Yeah, at it's core, the Ghost Rider concept is solid, but it's all the weird convolutions added on that disinterest me. But that's the 90's for you.
Me, I'd settle for a well-written series about a hard-travelin' hero with a flaming skull. Who bikekicks dudes in the face with his Hellcycle.
Brian Cronin
February 21, 2007 at 5:35 pm
But with <> instead of ()(/)!
Omar Karindu
February 21, 2007 at 5:58 pm
What was Shang-Chi's false status quo?
John Seavey
February 22, 2007 at 6:14 am
I'd assume that he's after his father, Fu Manchu...but by setting up the defeat of a single enemy as his goal, you either set the series up as a finite one (he defeats Fu Manchu, and goes home), set him up as doomed to futility (Fu Manchu always gets away), or else have to later find something for him to do once he's defeated his father...ie, find a new status quo once the false one's completed.
Incidentally, anyone want to take guesses as to what column will cover the "false status quo" in detail? I'll give one hint--it's a Marvel Essential, not a DC Showcase Presents.
Greg Hatcher
February 22, 2007 at 8:08 am
I can think of several candidates. It's what screenwriters call "Gilligan syndrome" -- solve the problem set up in the premise and the series is over. The most obvious possibilities I can see on my Essentials shelf are Killraven and Godzilla, though you also can make a good case for Werewolf by Night, Tomb of Dracula, and the Hulk all being saddled with the same thing. Watching writers struggle with that problem on the Hulk is one of the reasons that title has been so weird over the years.